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nice movie reference

this animation is the pinnacle of newgrounds and definately fits the roster of all the other NG videos

But seriously, one picture with terrible lipsync talking about stuff that isn't even about Newgrounds will definitely get you to 1 star. Improve.

StaticSkull responds:

hopefully i will next time

Look, I don't wanna come off as rude, but I still want to voice my own opinion, so here it is.
To be fair and square, I did not like this animation. The artwork was made by someone else (at least draw the characters and backgrounds by yourself, instead of stealing the models elsewhere), the animation is choppy, the background is again not made by you and even placed badly, and the music quality is mediocre. Nuff said.

StaticSkull responds:

Thank you for the review but I'm not able to make puppets

Just to let you know, this review is mainly focused on the WIP preview itself, just so you can fix things that aren't right.

The animation is definately an improvement from your Stick Skits days, but it still feels amatuer to me. First off, when you're doing frame-by-frame animation, I'd recommend turning on onion-skinning to make doing it easier. Also, the lines look really bad, mainly because you're using default brushed. While this works for some (specifically Animation Wheel), it doesn't work here. I'd reccommend going to a bigger brush (and also zooming in to get thinner, but better looking lines. And if you want to also, you can turn on pressure sensitivity to make the lines look even better. One more thing is that I'd recomment working on an animatic for the video first before starting work the complete animation, just so you can get an idea of what the animation would be like. But hey, it's probably your first time animating something legit with Flash, so take your time and practise with the tools before going head first into creating a big series like this. That, and you can also look up Flash tutorials to learn more about how Flash works, and what you can do with it. I know you've created shit before, but I still have hope that you'll become a good animator.

Keep improving, and having fun with what you do! ;)

StaticSkull responds:

Thanks dude

TBH, the art was ok (definately better than your previous ones), however, I wouldn't really recommend uploading speedart videos to Newgrounds. They're more for other platforms, such as Tumblr, YouTube or Twitter. Plus, most of these speedart videos are only two stars, so again, they're not really recommended on Newgrounds. Just saying.

please stop putting sponsors in your films unless if necessary.

tobuscus. nuff said

Stay in drugs and don't do school!

How the hell did this get onto the Newgrounds Twitter account?

I didn't really enjoy this cartoon. First off, the story. The whole "oh boy, the villian is a pervert" joke was not funny in the slightest and wasn't even unique to the source material. The whole animation was about some guy looking at porn. There's not much stuff that could be done to make it funny. However, at least this animation was trying to tell a joke (even if it fell flat), rather than shouting out painfully obvious references onto people's faces, so I'll give it that. But other than that, there's nothing interesting/funny about that unless you put in the time and effort to do so. Next time you make a parody animation, actually do some research, find something interesting, put a comedic spin on it, and overall, make it somewhat funny.

Next, the actual animation. I'll give it this, the art, colours and even the backgrounds were really well done, and I can definitely see you as a pretty good artist because of this. However, there was a lot of tweening & bouncing and not enough frame-by-frame animation & inbetweens, which sucks, since this animation was based on an action show. Also, the shading was a bit consistent. Sometimes, characters were shaded normally, but other times, the shading was completely black, or there was no shading at all. Unless if this is supposed to be a style, it just comes off as weird, unnatural, and amateur at best.

Finally, everything else. I liked the voice acting, but the music at the beginning was a bit too quiet, and I had to listen to it closely to find out that there was music in that scene. Also, I don't like the fact that the credits take up almost half the video (kinda like that one animation that you made).

So to sum up, the animation was sub-par at best, the "jokes" made were bad (but not as terrible as the previous video), the credits take up half the video, and overall, this video was crap. I can see you being a really good animator in the future, but with cartoons like these, I don't think you'll get very far in your career.
Just, try again.

alicemargiela responds:

Hello, pal! I read your comment and it is true some of the animation was lacking but I am still learning tools and other things for animation. If you don't like these videos, I guess it's fine. But I will not stop making parodies and videos I enjoy making. But I am working an original short with my best friend at the moment. But with parodies, they're not for everyone. Hoping you understand, champ.

Aussie animator, artist and graphic designer. Endlessly tired, but still kickin'.
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